We went to different places in the school and outside of the school and we listened to things and we wrote them down in our writer's notebook. We did that because Kate Dicamillo and other writers that we read they observed all those things and we want to be great writers like them. (McKenzie)
here are some of the things we heard:
the air vent sounded like a big ghost -mack.
the pages of our notebooks flutered it sounded like butter fly wings flapping-pati.
feet stomping loudly like ogre feet-ella
a water fountain that sounded like you were listening into a seashell-Lucas
A heater that sounded like a fast & long intake of breath. -Knox
frogs ribbit loudly like a special gun -loick
Car zooming loudly it reminds me of cars raceing -cole
the air vent sounded like when your in a plane -heming
Music chiming like a bomb going off! - james
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